{"id":26075,"date":"2019-04-24T10:10:51","date_gmt":"2019-04-24T00:10:51","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.machines4u.com.au\/mag\/?p=26075"},"modified":"2022-06-15T11:30:43","modified_gmt":"2022-06-15T01:30:43","slug":"create-killer-subject-lines","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.machines4u.com.au\/mag\/create-killer-subject-lines\/","title":{"rendered":"How To Create Killer Subject Lines (And Things To Avoid!)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">You invest so much time perfecting email copy, adding quality images and choosing the best call to action, but what\u2019s the point if no one opens your email? That\u2019s where a killer subject line comes in.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Your email subject line is arguably the <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">most<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> important aspect of your email, because ultimately it\u2019s what\u2019s driving people to click through to your products or services. First impressions matter, so make it count!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">People <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">always <\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">judge emails by their subject lines. And, if yours isn\u2019t standing out, looks spammy or isn\u2019t showing correctly, you\u2019ll fall short of generating those leads. <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.business2community.com\/infographics\/understanding-importance-e-mail-subject-lines-infographic-01492127#za6tqbgOJuwEl071.97\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Data shows<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> that 47% of people open emails based on the subject line alone. That\u2019s a lot of pressure!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But don\u2019t worry\u2014in this article, we\u2019ll go over some email subject line best practices and things to avoid. <\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Email Subject Line Best Practices<\/span><\/h2>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">1. Keep it short and sweet<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">With up to <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.aweber.com\/email-marketing\/2019-email-marketing-statistics.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">46% of emails being opened on mobile devices<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, it\u2019s important to consider how your subject line will display on those smaller screens. Many email providers stop showing a subject line on mobiles anywhere from 33 and 43 characters. So to make sure your subject hits home, put the important info at the very beginning.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Generally speaking, <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.aweber.com\/email-marketing\/2019-email-marketing-statistics.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">82% of marketers send subject lines with 60 characters or less<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, which is why we recommend writing subject lines between 30 and 59 characters. Although, creating an even shorter subject line containing 20 or less characters could be a great opportunity to stand out from your competitors.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">2. Use a personal sender name<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Personalisation is key when sending emails, which is why using a real sender name is more inviting for people than using \u201cnoreply@companyname.com\u201d.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Using a no-reply email is like shutting down a conversation before it\u2019s even begun. And that\u2019s the opposite of what we want. So, to avoid being marked as spam and give the best first impression use a personal sender name from a real person.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Why and how is this important to your subject line? Let\u2019s think about how these emails will display in the inbox. The sender name and the subject line are the first 2 things a recipient will see, and if the sender name doesn\u2019t sound or look like someone the recipient wants to hear from it\u2019s more likely to be marked as spam. <\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">3. Segment your lists<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">With this one it\u2019s important to think about relevance. Ask yourself: \u201cIs this email relevant to my entire email list?\u201d The answer is probably \u201cno\u201d, and that\u2019s where segmented lists come in. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Segmenting lists allows you to target your messages to specific people who have interacted to similar content in the past. So, if you\u2019re sending out the top 10 new release tractors to a list of caterers you might want to think again. The subject line is where this starts and ends, the subject line has to be relevant to the email you\u2019re sending and should consider who the target market is.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Not sure how to do it? Take a look at our article on <\/span><a href=\"\/mag\/segment-email-lists-10-best-practice-tips\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">how to segment your list here<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">4. Don\u2019t be misleading<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It\u2019s one thing to capture your recipients\u2019 attention. It\u2019s another to mislead for the click. No one wants to be the business that cried wolf, so avoid making false promises in your email subject lines. Otherwise you may see your open rates dwindle.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Your subject line sets the expectation for what the reader will see inside. So when it\u2019s not the same message, your audience will inadvertently learn not to trust you. This can lead to more unsubscribes and lower open rates.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">5. Use numbers<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Numbers, especially odd ones, draw attention and stand out against letters. So, for a higher open rate we suggest incorporating numbers into your subject line, but only if it makes sense to do so.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/coschedule.com\/blog\/email-subject-line-best-practices\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Data by YesWare<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> suggests that email open and reply rates were higher for email subject lines that contained numbers:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Average open rate without number: 51.9%<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Average open rate with number: 53.2%<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.hubspot.com\/marketing\/improve-your-email-subject-line\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Hubspot<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> also state that subject lines with data and numbers help your emails get noticed and stand out thanks to the clear and straightforward message.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">6. Use incentives<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">People love to feel like they\u2019re getting a bargain, which is why incentives work wonders in email subject lines. Put your offer up front for all to see, and you should see your open rates rise. <\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">7. Create urgency<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ever heard of the fear of missing out (FOMO)? It\u2019s a great strategy to use in your email subject line. Creating a sense of urgency gets people to take action because they don\u2019t like missing out or losing out on a great deal. <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.business2community.com\/infographics\/understanding-importance-e-mail-subject-lines-infographic-01492127#za6tqbgOJuwEl071.97\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">According to Chief Marketer in a study by Email Center<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, subject lines that create urgency and exclusivity can give a 22% higher open rate. So, if you have a great sale running, make sure you create a bit of urgency to increase your open rate.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">8. Use top performing words<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Fact is, some words work better than others in subject lines. Some pique interest, while others get ignored. <\/span><a href=\"http:\/\/www.marketingprofs.com\/charts\/2015\/26984\/five-most-effective-and-ineffective-words-in-email-subject-lines\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">According to Alchemy Worx<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, here are just 5 of the top performing words based on open rate:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Upgrade (65.68% open rate)<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Just (64.76% open rate)<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Content (59.05% open rate)<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Go (55.84% open rate)<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Wonderful (55.10% open rate)<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Source: Alchemy Worx, 2015<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Things To Avoid<\/span><\/h2>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">1. Avoid spam trigger words<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">As mentioned earlier, some words perform better than others. So, it comes as no surprise that <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.invespcro.com\/blog\/email-subject-lines-statistics-and-trends\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">69% of emails flagged as spam<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> are reported because of the email subject line. To avoid the spam filter,<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0try to avoid the following words:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Miss<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Deals<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Groovy<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Conditions<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Friday!<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">100%<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">$$$<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Free<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">These words don\u2019t have a positive impact on your subject line, and therefore should be avoided.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">2. Avoid exclamation points!!!<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Exclamation points can make your otherwise great subject line look unprofessional and spammy. So, it\u2019s best to avoid using them, especially more than one. Exclamation points can work against you to dilute the message instead of giving it more impact, so whenever you\u2019re tempted to include one, think about whether it adds any value to your message.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">3. Don\u2019t use ALL CAPS<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">No one likes being yelled at, so to avoid that we suggest refraining from using all caps in your subject line. It might grab attention, but it probably won\u2019t be the attention you want (i.e. opening your email to click \u2018unsubscribe\u2019).<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">All-caps subject lines can be annoying and may even look like spam. According to Radicati Group, more than <\/span><a href=\"http:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2014-2018-Executive-Summary.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">85% of respondents<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> prefer all lowercase subject lines. Instead of bombarding people with all caps, try a different tactic to grab their attention.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">4. Avoid emojis and special characters<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">While some people suggest that emojis and special characters are a great way to grab attention and stand out from the crowd, it\u2019s not always the case. Emojis can alienate your audience, some people love them, and some people don\u2019t. Worse yet, they may even trigger the spam filter. You also run the risk of your subject line not displaying correctly, because of different device capabilities, when you insert an emoji or special character. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Remember, not all email providers are created equal. Where in some email clients emojis look great, in others it might be replaced with an empty box with a question mark inside it\u2026 which can negatively impact your open rates as well. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">So, now you know the best practices and things to avoid when creating a killer email subject line, it\u2019s time to get started!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Let us know if you found this article helpful in the comments below.<\/span><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 8pt;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Sources:<\/span> <span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Alchemy Worx, Hubspot, martechseries.com, Campaign Monitor, business2community.com<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>You invest so much time perfecting email copy, adding quality images and choosing the best call to action, but what\u2019s the point if no one opens your email? That\u2019s where a killer subject line comes in. 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